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  • Lyric Poetry Re: walking and getting nowhere

    im not sure what you mean...though i do appreciate your comments...could you plz be more spacifac? thanx again!

    Aug 18, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: always never question

    Always Never Question Always laugh Never cry Keep on smiling Or else you die Terrifying end Undecided fate Questions asked Answers late What to live for I cannot say Breathe ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: [currently untitled]

    very interesting...i really enjoyed it. it was fresh, different and unique. it gave a feeling of mystery and confusion but at the same time a feeling of perpose and knowing ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: How We're Spending Friday Night...

    i really enjoyed your poem. you really gave a solid feeling of constant question and doubt that we all feel at some point in our lives, "are we living it ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: You

    wow...i must say..that was very powerful and full of emotion. i coud really feel your anger and hurt FOR your friend. a peice of advice, being less direct and more ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: walking and getting nowhere

    Walking and Getting Nowhere Sitting in the deafening silence Contemplating the end Forgetting the beginning Wondering how long there is left to go The horizon still seems so far off ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New to Young Writers Society!

    hi new you can prob name is raven and im a total book worm and have a passion for writting...i live in a small town in canada where there is ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi im new to this site

    new to...Ive only been here for a matter of minutes but I can already tell that this is an awesome site...i live in a small town in Canada where there ...

    Aug 17, 2008


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